Class feedback i received.
The main common points of concern were:
- Need for more photos ( different models)
- Bolder second cover ( purple doesn’t stand out)
- Change positioning of some the cover lines as hard to read
- Work on the contents ( mixed opinions on whether to keep the strip containing the editors note)
Taking these comments on board my plan going forward:
- Most importantly take more photos.
- Change the font colour on my second page.
- Continue experimenting with the position of my cover lines.
- Refine my website making it more exciting and memorable.
- Deciding between the layout preferences of my contents pages.
I then did a photo shoot in London, where I took a variety of photos which I hope I can include in both the contents and website pages.
